sábado, 27 de noviembre de 2010
My favourite place
My favourite place is Cádiz, Spain. I love their beachs. I always go to visit their beachs in summer, and in winter I sometimes go to visit their beachs. In winter the water it´s cold and it´s windy. I meet with my friend Elena for go to the beach. Here, we play with waves and the sand. Sometimes, we go to the swimming pool. Later, we have luch in the italian restaurant. It´s funny when we are together.
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...I love their beachs (ITS BEACHES). I always go to visit their beachs (ITS BEACHES) in summer, and in winter I sometimes go to visit their beachs.(ITS BEACHES) In winter the water it´s (IS)cold and it´s windy. I meet with (no WITH) my friend Elena for (TO GO/FOR GOING)go to the beach. Here, we play with waves and the sand. Sometimes, we go to the swimming pool. Later, we have luch in the italian (CAPITAL LETTER)restaurant. It´s funny when we are together.
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